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Confusion ...

Am I allowed to touch you?

Do I have to stop being me?

When I want to feel you must I pull away?

If I were to fall would you catch me?

Am I in a nightmare that I can't wake from?

Am I suddenly nothing?

Is there a point to all this anymore?

Will you take my soul and leave me empty?

Make the world stop just for a moment.

I'll just close my eyes and let go of life.
My poetry is not always bright and cheerful, but it is always from inside me.


Confusion © Jennifer Clark
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PrisonerOfMusic Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Wow. I can sense the mystery in this, and I love it. You make it obvious to your readers that you haven't lived the easiest of lives, but you're keeping most intricate details to yourself. I really admire that in a fellow writer. Keep up the good work! :)
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DarkSxKitten Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your comment! It means a lot that others also enjoy my writing. Writing from personal experience isn't always easy to show others, but you are right that I give details without specifics most of the time as in this.
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PrisonerOfMusic Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Which is exactly what I love about that particular part of work. It takes a good writer to paint such a good picture, but it takes a great writer to express emotion such as that with so little exposition. You also make your writing relatable to your readers. Again, another trait of a great writer. :) You are fantastic! :D
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DarkSxKitten Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it, it reminds me of the past, something that I'm glad to be past now :)
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DarkSxKitten Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome n.n
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